问题: 帮我看看这份英文简历好吗?已粘贴在下面了,谢谢
这是我自己写的英文简历,请高手赐教,谢谢!
Jingwen Yang
Jingbao Park, Anwai Street,No183,Dongcheng District,Beijing,100011,China
1371-877-8092
Promo366@163.com
Work Experience
April 2006-present BEIJING BAOJING PROPERTY MANAGEMENT CORPORATION
LTD.Propety Assistant,Customer Service Center of Jingbao Park
receive visitors, answer telephone about routine questions and provide basic service effectively and efficiently.
have good knowledge of basical facilities care,perfectly performed in coordinating with technical staffs under direct conduction.
Skillful in operating property management.intelligence system,and Word,
Excel,PPT.
maintain wonderful relations with tenants and deal with the complaint jointly with the manager.
review monthly arrears reports,and issure reminders to customers on outstanging accounts.
play key role in investigate the satisfaction about property management every half a year,as well as solve the problems,sort out the feedback and finish the analysis reports,resulting in the increasing of satisfactory rate to 95%.
organize vatious community activities.
edit and produse newletters published in the companies’newspaper every month.
May 2006-July 2006 BEIJING BAOJING PROPERTY MANAGEMENT CORPORA-
TION LTD.WenChengJieZuoProject
take active part in the admissiom process with especialty in checking
the house
Education
Bachelor of Management,School of Economic Management,Beijing For-
estry University
Qualification & Professional Designations
Passed Band Four of CET, September 2003
Marth 2004 to July 2004,taked listening and speaking training courses in New Oriental School,and passed the examination
Certified Manager’s Position of Property Management Company, May 2006
Got 455 score on CET Six, June 2006
Value Proposition
Be highly organized,efficient,be willing and able to work well with others
Willing to learn and progress
Doing on-line shopping and reading,swimming,skating,learing language
解答:
简单看了看,提几点小建议:
1、工作经历按时间倒序排列;
2、描述工作经历时动词用一般过去时,而不是现在时;
3、描述工作经历不必过于详细,无需叙述责任,仅列出成绩即可;
4、注意排版,对标题必须突出显示,但要保持格式一致,如用粗体则都用粗体,不过间用斜体等别的格式;
5、通读一遍,仔细检查,确保绝无拼写错误。
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