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问题: 帮我看看这份英文简历好吗?已粘贴在下面了,谢谢

这是我自己写的英文简历,请高手赐教,谢谢!
Jingwen Yang
Jingbao Park, Anwai Street,No183,Dongcheng District,Beijing,100011,China
1371-877-8092
Promo366@163.com
Work Experience
April 2006-present BEIJING BAOJING PROPERTY MANAGEMENT CORPORATION
LTD.Propety Assistant,Customer Service Center of Jingbao Park
 receive visitors, answer telephone about routine questions and provide basic service effectively and efficiently.
 have good knowledge of basical facilities care,perfectly performed in coordinating with technical staffs under direct conduction.
 Skillful in operating property management.intelligence system,and Word,
Excel,PPT.
 maintain wonderful relations with tenants and deal with the complaint jointly with the manager.
 review monthly arrears reports,and issure reminders to customers on outstanging accounts.
 play key role in investigate the satisfaction about property management every half a year,as well as solve the problems,sort out the feedback and finish the analysis reports,resulting in the increasing of satisfactory rate to 95%.
 organize vatious community activities.
 edit and produse newletters published in the companies’newspaper every month.
May 2006-July 2006 BEIJING BAOJING PROPERTY MANAGEMENT CORPORA-
TION LTD.WenChengJieZuoProject
 take active part in the admissiom process with especialty in checking
the house
Education
 Bachelor of Management,School of Economic Management,Beijing For-
estry University
Qualification & Professional Designations
 Passed Band Four of CET, September 2003
 Marth 2004 to July 2004,taked listening and speaking training courses in New Oriental School,and passed the examination
 Certified Manager’s Position of Property Management Company, May 2006
 Got 455 score on CET Six, June 2006
Value Proposition
 Be highly organized,efficient,be willing and able to work well with others
 Willing to learn and progress
 Doing on-line shopping and reading,swimming,skating,learing language

解答:

简单看了看,提几点小建议:

1、工作经历按时间倒序排列;
2、描述工作经历时动词用一般过去时,而不是现在时;
3、描述工作经历不必过于详细,无需叙述责任,仅列出成绩即可;
4、注意排版,对标题必须突出显示,但要保持格式一致,如用粗体则都用粗体,不过间用斜体等别的格式;
5、通读一遍,仔细检查,确保绝无拼写错误。